Tuesday 7th February
I Remember...
Laying in the grass under the shelter of an oak tree.
The fat leaves of the oak tree tickled my face.
I looked up to see the candy floss shaped clouds; they looked like they were swaying to the beat of the wind.
My cat came up and sat on my chest ,she was warm but her eyes were wild.
I brushed a tiny ant off my face; its little feet clambering onto my hand.
I put my hand on the grass and it scampered off.
That was my summer.
I was learning to write a piece of descriptive writing and to notice how the structure works.I had to use a lot of adjectives and similes to make it exciting. The first line was what you are doing , the second line was some descriptive writing based on what you were doing and the last part was that was my summer. I think I put lots of descriptive words. What I could do better next time is use more similes.
