Surf Life Savers!

A couple of weeks ago we went to see some surf life savers. They were really helpful  and I learnt a lot and had some fun ! We played running games and games with their equipment. It was really fun.`

School Triathlon

A couple of weeks ago At our school we had our own tryathlon. We swam at the beach, then ran back to school, and then did laps around the field. After the triathlon  I was TIRED!

Kitty Kitty Kitsune

Kitsune

Their bushy three tails flapping to the wind.

Their eyes like deep blue pools.

Their ears like soft petals.

Their fur as soft as a blanket.

They live in a hollow tree full of their favorite juicy  food birds and bunnies!

In that uneven hollow tree where they live it is wet and damp and filled with soft bedding of moss prrrrrfect. In the day their sport is stealing crummy delightful food out of a humungus! Manshion.   Strawberries, blackberries and anything juicy you can name.

They steal till days end !

I was learning to a piece of descriptive writing about a kitsune. ( A kitsune is a cat with three tails ) I think I used a lot of adjectives I need to use more onomatopoeia.

beach clean up

Last week On friday Our whole school Did a beach clean up there was all sorts of yucky  trash And to be honest I was not surprised here is a photo. I saw lots of cigarette butts and Astin, Ava, Lily, Freya and I found three hundred and seventy one.  I really enjoyed it but next time I hope there is less rubbish.

The moa DNA

I was learning about the moa and how they are trying to bring it back to life. I wanted to make it interesting so I hope you enjoy!

Terrific Tasty Tangelo

Tasty Tangelo

Tuesday 21st  February  2017

The tasty orange and yellow twisted together Tangelo was an oval shape that was as bumpy as a gravel road. As I peeled the rough skin it made a crunch noise. Once it was peeled it was a orange with white  lines between the segments.I sunk my teeth into the rubbery flesh and what I saw inside was lots and lots piled on top of each other where se through little beads of juice! Sqwish!

as I bite into the beads of flavor juice dribbles down my chin  all of my tastebuds scream TASTY! And I agree.
I was learning to do a descriptive piece of writing  about a delicious tangelo that my teacher brought in. I was working on similes and adjectives.I think I did well with similes. I think I need to work on Onomatopoeia.
     

I Really Remember

Tuesday 7th February

I Remember...

Laying in the grass under the shelter of an oak tree.

The fat leaves of the oak tree tickled my face.

I looked up to see the candy floss  shaped clouds; they looked like they were swaying to the beat of the wind.

My cat came up and sat on my chest ,she was warm but  her eyes were wild.

I brushed a tiny ant off my face; its little  feet clambering onto my hand.

I put my hand  on the grass and it scampered off.

That was my summer.

I was learning to  write a piece of descriptive writing and to notice how the structure works.I had to use a lot of adjectives and similes to make it exciting. The first line was what you are doing , the second line was some descriptive writing based on what you were doing   and the last part was  that was my  summer. I think I put lots of descriptive words. What I could do better next time is use  more similes.